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C-Novel: A Naive Short-tempered Girl (纯情丫头火辣辣) 405-2

Chapter 405

Great General Bing Ye

Part 2 (Two)

“Great General Bing Ye, this girl was saved by us when we were having patrol!” azurro4cielo

That pair of amber color eyes for once again looked at Yao Yao: “Chinese?” translated:azurro4cielo

She nervously gulping her saliva, hurried she shaking her head, she used her fluent Japanese to give him an answer: “In reply, in reply to Great General Bing Ye, I… I am a Japanese.” credit to azurro4cielo

Bing Ye narrowed his eyes, suddenly turned his back. credit to azurro4cielo

Seeing that man’s back gradually leaving, she heaved a long sigh, honestly, other than Yu Ao Tian, this man is the second person who could make her to feel this fear. credit to azurro4cielo

At the time when Yao Yao wiping her sweats. Who knows, gradually Bing Ye who has been far away, spoke: “Colonel NeMo, bring that girl to my General Mansion!” credit to azurro4cielo

At same time Colonel NeMo and Yao Yao are exchanging their glances. “Yes… Yes…. Great General Bing Ye…”

“Colonel NeMo, why Great General Bing Ye asked me to go to his mansion?” She didn’t want to have any interaction with this man who radiating danger aura, she didn’t…. credit to azurro4cielo

“Sorry, I don’t know. Before I did do some rescue which wasn’t less alike this type of incident victims, but Great General Bing Ye never asked, this is first time he asked me, moreover he wanted me to bring you to General mansion. Just to let you know, Great General Bing Ye is someone clean freak, he never allows any woman to get into his General mansion!”

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Weirdos clean freak? Could it mean that he cannot get close to any woman? credit to azurro4cielo

Then why he asked her to his mansion? Could it be, Bing Ye knew that she is a Chinese? credit to azurro4cielo

“Ne…. Colonel NeMo, can you tell me what kind of person Great General Bing Ye is, so that I understand how to face him later.” read at azurro4cielo.wordpress translation. If read elsewhere, this chapter had been stolen. Stop read from theft!

“Let get in car, I will tell you slowly.” read at azurro4cielo.wordpress translation. If read elsewhere, this chapter had been stolen. Stop read from theft!

“En.” read at azurro4cielo.wordpress translation. If read elsewhere, this chapter had been stolen. Stop read from theft!

Ya Si Lan is country with strong military weapons, at same time they also have strong military base, the way they govern are different with Chinese, divides first rank Prime Minister, second rank Director, third rank Official officers and etc. But they are only have two ranks, one is Officers and the other is military. Military is always above their officers.

Bing Ye is ‘Military’ people and also person who hold the highest position, he is leading hundred and thousand big Generals! It can be said that one first have thousand subordinates! His status and power are as equal alike Chinese Vice Prime Minister! azurro4cielo.wordpress.com

Moreover Bing Ye isn’t born from the royalty background, but he just comes from an ordinary citizen that rare happened. When he was ten year old he has been so stand out as conspicuously brilliant, at his twenty he has already promoted. At twenty eight years old he has already be a Great General, and now at his 31 year old he can be said as the most legendary person in Ya Si Lan country. azurro4cielo.wordpress.com

And about his character, very similar with his name, cold and mysterious. Colonel NeMo never seen anyone seen Bing Ye’s smile, also never seen others expression of Bing Ye, continually he always shows that kind of expression, expressionless. Even his speaking voice is always so less, very less.

© 2011 – 2017 AZURRO azurro4cielo.wordpress.com ALL RIGHTS RESERVED. Translated for azurro4cielo.wordpress.com. If you are not reading this from azurro4cielo.wordpress.com, then this translation has been posted without the permission of the translator.

Colonel NeMo only can say this much to Yao Yao, after all the interaction between him and Bing Ye aren’t much, in addition if there is an event there will be a short contact or else it remaining as business. azurro4cielo

Sitting on the military car, Yao Yao is looking Ya Si Lan country’s scenery through window, country appearance.

The strange is…. read at azurro4cielo.wordpress translation. If read elsewhere, this chapter had been stolen. Stop read from theft!

After all she feels so familiar. read at azurro4cielo.wordpress translation. If read elsewhere, this chapter had been stolen. Stop read from theft!

“Colonial NeMo, is there the world trade center?” read at azurro4cielo.wordpress translation. If read elsewhere, this chapter had been stolen. Stop read from theft!

NeMo looked the place where Yao Yao pointed, startled nodding his head: “How can you know? Have you ever come to our country before?” read at azurro4cielo.wordpress translation. If read elsewhere, this chapter had been stolen. Stop read from theft!

Hah…. read at azurro4cielo.wordpress translation. If read elsewhere, this chapter had been stolen. Stop read from theft!

This is the most grief of hers, it is so obviously she never come to Ya Si Lan Country, but she is so familiar with its building. Why? azurro4cielo.wordpress.com

Heart, it feels a sense of restless, Yao Yao simply no longer seeing this wonderful country of Ya Si Lan.

Not long after that the car is slowly parked in front of Majestic Mansion. azurro4cielo

Here, it is located not far from Ya Si Lan’s palace, this Majestic building is Great General Bing Ye’s Mansion!

Standing at outside, looking at this magnificent building, it really fits to Great General Bing Ye’s character, all is so orderly, austere. azurro4cielo.wordpress.com

Colonel NeMo is speaking to the soldiers that guard in front and then bring along Yao Yao to enter Great General Mansion. this translated by azurro4cielo.wordpress

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23 thoughts on “C-Novel: A Naive Short-tempered Girl (纯情丫头火辣辣) 405-2

  1. Please let him recognise her… We need some background on our protagonist.. And what about YAT??? he was not caught was he…

    Thanks for the update..

  2. YAT Where are you????? Hope you were found by Long Yu Group….YY, Would this General be a new suitor or somebody from your past?
    Thanks Azurro for the hard work!!!
    Hugs!

  3. Where is YAT???? Is he a live????? ,please YY remember your past and remember YAT!!!!!!! Thanks azurro for this chapter

  4. I think finally we are getting close in discovering Y.Y’s past memories ^^ thanks Azurro more power to you💪

  5. Thank you so much Azurro. I recently found your blog and what a wonderful gift it truly is. I’ve been doing a marathon reading of ANSTG and my eyes hurt a lot just by continuously looking at the screen (but who cares) 😂. I love your work and will be checking your other projects. You’ve improved a lot on the translations and just wanted to thank you and cheer you on. Jia you!

  6. Hi Azzurio, thank you for the translations You’re doing really well & it’s a great romance novel whose bones show the fine marking of the grand traditional style (He’s a complete cad with a buried soft side that only she can access, she’s got some form of brilliance buried beneath a landslide of ditziness leading to multiple misunderstandings amidst drama, action & gore – with lighter moments & characters thrown in). I’m loving reading it although I keep finding myself editing it in my head which to me is mainly fun … Just one thing:
    It’s fuming with rage. Or simply fuming, or raging inside/internally/silently. Or “…her rage so palpable she appeared to be giving off sparks” (the image I had of Xiao Man storming into the Berson Group building.)
    In English we don’t rage with Fume or raging in Fume. “Fume” is smoke & “Rage” is fire. That’s probably the best way I could explain it. The fire can be smoking but the smoke won’t be firing. (Unless “Smoke” is a guy & he’s holding a gun.)
    Keep up the great work. I know it’s not easy to translate nuances into a language which isn’t your native tongue. You’re doing a top job.

    1. Thank you for the input + correction + explanation. I really don’t know if rage and fume should be separated because the Chinese words described as someone who is extremely angry to the point, face red and it as if smoke coming out from that person (my imagination was alike when Uncle Vernon went ballistic to Harry Potter, his face was red and as if in fuming) . So that, I thought perhaps Rage+Fume can be combined.

      1. They can be, but his face would be red with rage, not “in fuming.” He could definitely be said to be fuming though. The smoke coming out of his ears- those would be fumes. The word “Fumes” refers to smoke or gases (often smelly) given off by something. That’s why “fume” is part of the word “perfume”. When Fuming with rage a person would almost appear ready to burst, or to have smoke coming out of their ears – even possibly the top of their head. They are getting ready to burst into flames. (Think of a fire when you first try to light it. Not much fire, plenty of smoke, then it catches & there’s a “whoomph!!”
        Particularly if you added too much fire starter.)
        So recap: Fuming with rage, not raging with/in fume.

        English may seem clunky at times but the best rule is “keep it simple.” A lot of it is implication & leaving words/descriptions out after the first time. Just as important as putting them in that first time. This happens in conversation too.

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